Monday, September 24, 2012

paired writing



This term we had to do paired writing. Paired writing is when you pair up with a buddy and there is a tutor and a writer, I was a writer and my tutor was Chayse one of my friends.The thing I liked about it was that you tutor would tell some Awesome things that you have done.

Three things I think I have improved on are

1 I think I have learnt how to put my similes in to sentences 
2 I have also improved to write more words.
3 I have also improved by writing more interesting words.  




Two things I think my tutorer was good at were

1 because he was a good encourager
2  he also was good at doing brain storms because when I said something that wasn't that interesting he  would make the word I said a whole lot  interesting and write it in my brain storm.

 one thing that has challenged me are

 1thing I felt challenging was trying to write more interesting words

2 comments:

  1. Welcome to Team 12 Naz. You have laid out your post really neatly. I like how you have put the photos on different sides of your post.

    It sounds like you and Chayse developed a great learning relationship that has helped both of you.

    Can you share with me an example of one of your similes in a sentence in your writing.
    Mrs P

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    1. Thank you mrs p and yes I can show you a simile. e.g This paint is as yellow the sun

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