Monday, September 24, 2012

paired writing



This term we had to do paired writing. Paired writing is when you pair up with a buddy and there is a tutor and a writer, I was a writer and my tutor was Chayse one of my friends.The thing I liked about it was that you tutor would tell some Awesome things that you have done.

Three things I think I have improved on are

1 I think I have learnt how to put my similes in to sentences 
2 I have also improved to write more words.
3 I have also improved by writing more interesting words.  




Two things I think my tutorer was good at were

1 because he was a good encourager
2  he also was good at doing brain storms because when I said something that wasn't that interesting he  would make the word I said a whole lot  interesting and write it in my brain storm.

 one thing that has challenged me are

 1thing I felt challenging was trying to write more interesting words